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Detective Pie is on the case by Whatsapokemon Detective Pie is on the case by Whatsapokemon
This was no ordinary case.
Pinkie's senses were failing her.
She puffed a few bubbles on her pipe, contemplating the events she had just witnessed.
She should have foreseen the falling anvil that had nearly crushed her only an hour ago, it just didn't make sense.
What could possibly hide from her inborn abilities?
Suddenly realisation struck Pinkie like a herd of stampeding cows. Ice flowed through her veins as the only possible explanation bubbled to the surface.
"It can't be..."

Done in my stream because twitchy tail.
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Hayabusaoffaith Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really like. The writing is nice too.
Moonhoplite Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Elementary,my dear Twilight
Spiritofgenerosity Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Your lighting turned out great and the texture you put into the coat is wounderful, I also like the darker Line work.

the only problem I can see and this is me being RRRRRREEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLYYYYYYY Critical.

The shadows you used in the mane are a little too far towards blue (that is a REALLY nit picky thing to say ignore it) however you can only really tell when you look at the bottom of her mane where the slight blues is contrasted by the magenta outline.

Also the foot on the right should be slightly smaller than the one of the left to keep everything in perspective....

Once again, I am being really nit-picky and I hope I don't come off as a jerk or a Know-it-all (Which hang out with me for more than a Minute and you will find out I know nothing) I'm just trying to give some constructive critism....
Whatsapokemon Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Constructive criticism is useful, I like being told how I can improve because, well, it makes me improve. No matter what the situation I think everyone benefits from an ability to take advice. So thanks for pointing these out to me.

Anyway, I see that the contrast between the outline and the mane probably looks a bit weird. Do you think that maybe changing the colours of those areas of the outline to match the shading would be better? I think that having slightly blue shading makes it have a more night-time feel. I'll try out both anyway.

Also yeah, the back hoof is a little big, I'll fix that.

Also I forgot to shade the pipe, darn.
Onsaud Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
Where's her trusty macaw, Rarity?
Whatsapokemon Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hah, I forgot about that. It think it got deleted when I wrote "that'll do" over it unfortunately.
I shall redraw her as a macaw later!
Onsaud Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
Get on that! The people (the person) demand Bird Rarity!
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